It feels like the story is in a busy household where the children and parents have to get up early for work and school
Feels like something is wrong or is going to go wrong
Just thoughts. How did this one dog manage to survive? What is this dog doing out here?
I wondered what is happening. How did this happen so suddenly?
It kind of brings out a ray of hope of something positive. It lightens the mood.
This poem again brings out the ray of hope but also feels like something is gonna happen next
The house lights up as soon as the tree falls in through the windows. Everything is destroyed in an instance. Just creates a very dull atmosphere.
One last voice that is left in the house. That keeps repeating, "Today is August 5, 2026, today is August 5, 2026". One last piece of the house left between all the silence and smoke.